Comments on: Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.17.10

By: Yuna Youn

Yuna Youn — Sun, 21 Mar 2010 05:27:50 +0000

jar drags bright snail trail
within a still life of light
talk about layers

susan fish — Sat, 20 Mar 2010 01:29:14 +0000

The moonshine is gone
The sunlight’s warming rays hint
A wavy glass cross.

(Can I riff off Phil’s first line?)

Michelle Pendergrass — Thu, 18 Mar 2010 15:20:17 +0000

Posting for Phil:

The moonshine is gone
Its something not at the store
Papa must make more.

Erin Deremer — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 21:55:11 +0000

You may see through me
But you’ll never know what is
Kept inside of me.

Geoff M. Pope — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 21:00:03 +0000

After too many
episodes of L O S T, one starts
to see bottled ghosts.