Comments for Relief: A Christian Literary Expression http://www.reliefjournal.com Christian writing unbound. Thu, 11 Mar 2010 23:42:36 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 Comment on Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.10.10 by Erin Deremer http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/09/photo-haiku-wednesday-3-10-10/comment-page-1/#comment-684 Erin Deremer Thu, 11 Mar 2010 23:42:36 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=921#comment-684 Roy G. Biv asked me, "Why do we paint what is white, Like it's wrong, not right?" Roy G. Biv asked me,
“Why do we paint what is white,
Like it’s wrong, not right?”

]]> Comment on Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.10.10 by Ian Philpot http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/09/photo-haiku-wednesday-3-10-10/comment-page-1/#comment-683 Ian Philpot Thu, 11 Mar 2010 21:18:19 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=921#comment-683 This is where I rest, For I created a bench-- This is where you rest. This is where I rest,
For I created a bench–
This is where you rest.

]]> Comment on Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.10.10 by Geoff M. Pope http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/09/photo-haiku-wednesday-3-10-10/comment-page-1/#comment-682 Geoff M. Pope Thu, 11 Mar 2010 01:14:59 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=921#comment-682 Revision: long clay bench, ink brush -- wet Lent letters on dusty papyrus: “Slow Fast” Revision:

long clay bench, ink brush –
wet Lent letters on dusty
papyrus: “Slow Fast”

]]> Comment on Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.10.10 by Geoff M. Pope http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/09/photo-haiku-wednesday-3-10-10/comment-page-1/#comment-681 Geoff M. Pope Thu, 11 Mar 2010 00:27:35 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=921#comment-681 long clay bench, ink brush — wet Lent letters: “Slow Fast” (on dusty papyrus) long clay bench, ink brush —
wet Lent letters: “Slow Fast” (on
dusty papyrus)

]]> Comment on Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.10.10 by Michael Noblin http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/09/photo-haiku-wednesday-3-10-10/comment-page-1/#comment-679 Michael Noblin Wed, 10 Mar 2010 16:26:39 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=921#comment-679 It's occurred to me, That perhaps I should paint with a much larger brush. It’s occurred to me,
That perhaps I should paint with
a much larger brush.

]]> Comment on A Writer Wrestling with Unity by Brent Robison http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/02/27/a-writer-wrestling-with-unity/comment-page-1/#comment-678 Brent Robison Wed, 10 Mar 2010 12:06:56 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=745#comment-678 Geoff, thanks for your comment. I'm glad to learn about Laminin -- another way the body is a metaphor for the macrocosm. However, I don't ascribe any special meaning to the fact that it's shaped like a cross (as are many many things) -- it's just another fun "rhyme" in this illusory world. Geoff, thanks for your comment. I’m glad to learn about Laminin — another way the body is a metaphor for the macrocosm. However, I don’t ascribe any special meaning to the fact that it’s shaped like a cross (as are many many things) — it’s just another fun “rhyme” in this illusory world.

]]> Comment on A Writer Wrestling with Unity by Geoff M. Pope http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/02/27/a-writer-wrestling-with-unity/comment-page-1/#comment-674 Geoff M. Pope Mon, 08 Mar 2010 05:38:56 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=745#comment-674 Deeply thought-provoking and gripping piece, especially because earlier this week I learned about laminin. ("Laminin – The Cell Adhesion Molecule That Holds Us Together Is in the Shape of a CROSS!" is the title of an article available at www.southasianconnection.com.) Looking forward to learning more about Ultimate Indivisibility. Deeply thought-provoking and gripping piece, especially because earlier this week I learned about laminin. (“Laminin – The Cell Adhesion Molecule That Holds Us Together Is in the Shape of a CROSS!” is the title of an article available at http://www.southasianconnection.com.)

Looking forward to learning more about Ultimate Indivisibility.

]]> Comment on My Emerging Tendencies by Geoff M. Pope http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/04/my-emerging-tendencies/comment-page-1/#comment-672 Geoff M. Pope Mon, 08 Mar 2010 00:54:42 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=900#comment-672 Would this work: "I teach university students how to write concisely, coherently, correctly, and creatively; and I'm on the verge of being a nationally known writer"? Would this work: “I teach university students how to write concisely, coherently, correctly, and creatively; and I’m on the verge of being a nationally known writer”?

]]> Comment on My Emerging Tendencies by Geoff M. Pope http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/04/my-emerging-tendencies/comment-page-1/#comment-671 Geoff M. Pope Mon, 08 Mar 2010 00:50:11 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=900#comment-671 HWould this work: "I teach university students how to write concisely, coherently, correctly, and creatively; and I'm on the verge of being a nationally known writer"? HWould this work: “I teach university students how to write concisely, coherently, correctly, and creatively; and I’m on the verge of being a nationally known writer”?

]]> Comment on Photo Haiku Wednesday 3.3.10 by Geoff M. Pope http://www.reliefjournal.com/2010/03/03/photo-haiku-wednesday-3-3-10/comment-page-1/#comment-669 Geoff M. Pope Sun, 07 Mar 2010 07:33:41 +0000 http://www.reliefjournal.com/?p=910#comment-669 Sorry I am late. My rider didn't make it through the Needle's Eye. Sorry I am late.
My rider didn’t make it
through the Needle’s Eye.

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