Relief/Diner Online Submissions System

Hey! I am looking for feedback on these sonnets I wrote. Thanks!

The Foolishness of God

The foolishness of God is wiser than man’s
Wisdom. For who has silly, salvific plans
from death? What other plans extend this length?
God's weaknesses are stronger than man’s strength
For He is arisen from the dead. (O
Tipsy thoughts, aches and pains torment my head!) So
Pillars of learning bow before the Lord!
Body builder--God’s flab over your washboard!
For none like the Lord has there ever been,
Though weak, he crushes impurity and sin.
No body builder ’gainst his weakness dare stand;
Wise men made foolish in every land!
Thus I will rejoice in the Lord my Savior.

A Sonnet

You are ever more; You are ever more!

Hey everyone!

Travis here wanting to let you know that I also have a blog at Wordpress.com. Check it out at travisdoig.wordpress.com

Have an awesome day! Hope to have an actual update soon!

God bless!
Travis Doig