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The Foolishness of God

The foolishness of God is wiser than man’s
Wisdom. For who has silly, salvific plans
from death? What other plans extend to this length?
The weakness of God is stronger than man’s strength
For he has been raised from the dead.
(So crazy, this makes me ache in my head!)
Pillars of learning bow before the Lord;
Body builder--God’s flab over your washboard!
For none like the Lord has there ever been,
Though weak, he crushes impurity and sin
making wise men foolish in all our lands!
No body builder ’gainst his weakness stands!

A Sonnet

You are ever more; You are ever more!
Lifting these weak arms up from the floor!
A love which lasts forever, a bread so rich

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Hey everyone!

Travis here wanting to let you know that I also have a blog at Wordpress.com. Check it out at travisdoig.wordpress.com

Have an awesome day! Hope to have an actual update soon!

God bless!
Travis Doig

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